A Universe Filled With Stone
 
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A Universe Filled With Stone

I have this memory of a synopsis of a short story: it's an alien living in a universe completely filled with stone, and it's called something like "my stone telescope". Every now and then that memory pops up, but I've never been able to find the story. Now that we live in the age of AI I figured I'd ask, so I started the Gemini app, forgetting that I wasn't interacting with a search engine:

Me

A short story about a universe filled with stone called "my matter telescope" or something like that.

Gemini

The Lithic Gaze

Kaelen ran a hand over the rough, unyielding surface that stretched to an infinite, stony horizon. Here, in the Lithoverse, everything was stone. Not just planets and asteroids, but the very fabric of space, the oppressive, all-encompassing grey-brown matter that pressed in from all directions. There were no stars, no cosmic dust, no swirling nebulae - only stone, in variations of texture and shade that spoke of untold geological ages.

Life, or what passed for it, existed within pockets of excavated or naturally occurring voids. The Lithovores, like Kaelen, carved their existences from the matter itself, their ships and settlements nothing more than hollowed-out spaces within the colossal stone. Their history was etched into the walls of their cavern-cities, their science a deep understanding of lithic stresses and resonant frequencies. Communication was a complex system of seismic pulses and modulated tremors sent through the stone.

Kaelen was an explorer, a "gazer" as his kind were known. His vessel, the Chisel, was a marvel of Lithovore engineering, a perfectly balanced void capable of navigating the near-solid medium. But his most valuable tool wasn't a drill or a sonic cutter; it was the matter telescope.

Inherited from the Old Ones, a civilization that had vanished deeper within the stone ages ago, the matter telescope was a paradox. It didn't observe light or radiation - there was precious little of either in the Lithoverse. Instead, it manipulated the local stone to feel distant structures and events. By creating carefully calibrated resonant frequencies within the Chisel's hull and using a core of hyper-dense, unknown material in the telescope itself, Kaelen could perceive variations in the stone's composition and structure light-years away. It was like feeling the bones of the universe.

Today, the telescope hummed with a strange new pattern. Kaelen had been following a faint, anomalous tremor for cycles, a rhythmic pulse that didn't match any known geological activity or the communication of other Lithovore clans. As he focused the matter telescope, the faint vibrations resolved into something impossible: a perfect, impossibly smooth sphere of a material utterly alien to the Lithoverse. It was a void, yes, but not a carved one. It felt... empty. Truly empty.

The implications sent a tremor of a different kind through Kaelen. Everything they knew, everything they were, was defined by the stone. The idea of a perfect, non-stone void was not just foreign; it was fundamentally unsettling.

He guided the Chisel deeper, the matter telescope his only guide through the increasing density and pressure of the surrounding stone. The rhythmic pulse grew stronger, clearer. It wasn't a natural phenomenon. It was artificial. Finally, after what felt like an age of pushing through the lithic deep, the matter telescope screamed. Not with sound, but with a violent, jarring resonance that threatened to shatter the Chisel. Kaelen cut the power, the internal void of his ship groaning in protest.

Before him, detectable now even without the telescope, was a ripple in the stone, a distortion that spoke of immense, unnatural forces. And through the ripple, he felt it - the perfect, alien emptiness, larger than anything he could have imagined.

He activated a low-power sensor, a last resort for when the matter telescope was overwhelmed. A faint, almost imperceptible energy signature flickered. It was structured, complex, and unlike anything in their lithic world.

A voice, not of seismic tremor but of modulated energy, pulsed directly into Kaelen's mind. It was a cacophony of alien concepts, but one phrase resonated, translated imperfectly by his ship's ancient processors: "Beyond the Stone."

Kaelen stared at the distortion, the impossible void beyond. The Lithoverse, his entire reality, was a universe of stone. But the matter telescope, designed to understand that stone, had shown him something that defied it entirely. The rhythm wasn't a tremor; it was a knocking. And something, or someone, was waiting on the other side of the stone. He had peered into the deep, and the deep had peered back. The Lithoverse was far larger, and far stranger, than he had ever conceived.

Well, that was actually not bad. But not what I wanted.

Me

I was more thinking you'd tell me the name of such a story and where I can read it.

Gemini

Based on searches for existing science fiction stories, it appears there isn't a widely known or prominent work with the specific title "my matter telescope" or a story precisely matching the concept of a universe entirely composed of stone that is explored using something called a "matter telescope."

(...)

It's possible that the story you are thinking of is a lesser-known work, an independent publication, or perhaps you might be recalling a concept from a different type of media.

If you have any more details about the story, such as a character's name, a specific scene, or where you might have encountered it, that information could help in a more targeted search.

I gave up there and did some Googling, and via Reddit, came across Mountain[a] by Liu Cixin. It was a good story that touched on the practicalities of living in a universe filled with stone: there's only so much space available. If you dig you're only redistributing the stone and changing the shape of space, not getting any more space. In order to not lose space, traveling through the rock requires you to fill in the space behind you and thus creating a moving bubble inside the rock.

It was a good, solid, story - but it was written in 2015, and my memory is much older than that. I tried ChatGPT, but it came up empty handed too.

Me

Can you help me find a short story? It's about an alien that lives in a universe filled with stone and is called something like "my stone telescope".

ChatGPT

Based on your description, the short story you're seeking might be "Mountain" by Liu Cixin. This narrative features an alien species that originated within the stone-filled core of a planet, leading to a universe perceived as being filled with stone. The story delves into their unique evolution and understanding of physics, contrasting it with human experiences. The aliens' journey from the planet's core to its surface, encountering challenges like "changing stone" (water), aligns with your mention of an alien living in a universe filled with stone. While the title doesn't directly reference a telescope, the story's exploration of perception and understanding of the universe resonates with the metaphorical idea of a "stone telescope".

If this doesn't match the story you're recalling, could you provide any additional details? For instance, was the story part of a specific anthology, or do you recall any character names or specific plot points? Any extra information could help in pinpointing the exact story you're looking for.

Oh well.

Next Day. New day. New attempt with Gemini.

Me

Do you know anything about a short story about an alien who lives in a universe filled with stone?

Gemini

Ah, that sounds like a fascinating concept! While I don't have a specific, widely recognized short story in my memory banks about an alien living in a universe entirely made of stone, the idea sparks some interesting possibilities and resonates with certain science fiction themes.

(...)

If you can recall any more details, please let me know, and I'll do my best to help you find the story you're thinking of.

Me

The name is something like "my matter telescope".

Gemini

"My Matter Telescope"! That rings a bell! You're likely thinking of the short story "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" by Ted Chiang.

In this story, the protagonist develops a telescope that doesn't rely on light but instead uses a form of "matter transmission" to perceive distant objects by receiving minuscule samples of their physical material. This allows him to observe alien civilizations and environments in a fundamentally different way than traditional telescopes.

While the universe isn't entirely made of stone in the story, the alien world he becomes particularly fascinated with is indeed a place with a very different composition than Earth, often described as being rocky, mineral-rich, and having a slower, more geological pace of life compared to our vibrant biosphere. The alien beings themselves have a different relationship with their environment, and the story explores the profound implications of perceiving another world through its very matter.

Is this the story you were thinking of? It definitely features an alien and a universe (or at least an alien world) with a strong emphasis on non-biological, "stony" elements, as perceived through the unique lens of the matter-transmitter telescope.

Yes! That could be it. I googled the title, but... nothing. Was it a hallucination? I went back to Gemini.

Me

Could be. Where can I find it?

Gemini

That's great that it might be the one! "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" by Ted Chiang can be found in a few places:

  1. In his short story collection "Stories of Your Life and Others": This is the most likely place you'll find it. This collection includes some of his most acclaimed early work, including "Story of Your Life" (which was the basis for the movie "Arrival"). You can purchase this collection in physical book form, as an e-book, or as an audiobook from most major booksellers like:

    • Amazon[b]

    • Barnes & Noble

    • Independent bookstores

(...)

Me

I looked in that book, but there was no story with that name. What are your source for that story being there?

Gemini

You are absolutely right! My apologies. It seems my internal information incorrectly associated the title "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" with the collection "Stories of Your Life and Others."

Upon further checking and review of the contents of "Stories of Your Life and Others," the story "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" by Ted Chiang is NOT included in that collection.

My source for that incorrect information was likely a faulty association within my knowledge base. I am still under development and learning to manage and retrieve information accurately. Thank you for pointing out my mistake.

Where can you find "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope"?

"My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" was originally published in Nature in 1998 as a very short piece (often called a "fiction vignette" in Nature).

You can likely find it in the following places:

  • Nature Archives: You might be able to access the specific issue of Nature from 1998 through a library with online journal subscriptions or directly through the Nature website's archives, although there might be a paywall. Search for "Nature 1998 Ted Chiang fiction".

  • Ted Chiang's later collection, "Exhalation": This collection, published in 2019, does include "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope." So, if you have or can access this later collection, you will find the story there.

Me

What issue of Nature?

Gemini

The short story "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" by Ted Chiang was originally published in Nature, Volume 395, Issue 6703, on October 22, 1998.

Nature, Volume 395, Issue 6703 is from October 15, 1998. About now I was concluding that Gemini was hallucinating. Time to call it.

Me

There is no "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" in that issue of Nature, nor in any other. In fact, the story doesn't seem to exist. Can you tell me the first few paragraphs of it?

Gemini

This is becoming increasingly perplexing and concerning. If you've thoroughly checked the specified issue of Nature and haven't found "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope," and if broader searches are also coming up empty, it strongly suggests one of the following possibilities:

  • Significant Misremembering of the Title: While "My Matter Telescope" or "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" sounds plausible for a science fiction story by Ted Chiang, it's possible the actual title is slightly different, or contains different keywords.

  • Misattribution of Author: Could this story be by a different author whose style or themes you might be associating with Ted Chiang?

(...)

Me

Any short stories named "my something something telescope"?

Gemini

That's a very specific and useful constraint! Searching for short story titles that begin with "My... Telescope" or include similar possessive phrasing could help narrow things down significantly.

Here are some possibilities and how to explore them:

  1. Ted Chiang - Re-evaluation:

    Even though "My Matter-Transmitter Telescope" didn't pan out as expected, the fact that the title structure feels like his style (thoughtful, slightly technical) makes it worth a very careful second look. Could there be a slightly different wording you're remembering? Perhaps a variation on "matter" or "transmitter"? I still find it odd that the concept resonates so strongly with his themes.

  2. Online Short Story Databases and Indexes:

    • ISFDB (Internet Speculative Fiction Database): This is an invaluable resource. You can try searching for short stories with "telescope" in the title and then filter by author if you have any lingering suspicions. You can also try wildcard searches like "My * Telescope".

    • Science Fiction magazines' online archives: Many magazines (like Asimov's, Analog, The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction) have searchable online archives. You could try searching for "telescope" in their story titles.

That was actually a good suggestion. I went to ISFDB[c], typed in my * scope and... success! Me and My Antronoscope[d] by Barrington Bayley, written in 1973, popped up. (The final mysterious "antrono-" prefix in the title being from the Greek "ᾰ̓́ντρον" / "antron"[e], meaning "cave".) I figured I might as well provide feedback to Gemini and improve its knowledge base.

Me

Found it on ISFDB: "Me and My Antronoscope" by Barrington Bayley.

Gemini

"Me and My Antronoscope" by Barrington Bayley! That's fantastic news! I'm so glad you were able to find it on ISFDB. The title definitely fits the pattern of what you were remembering.

Barrington Bayley was a brilliant and imaginative science fiction writer known for his far-out concepts and unique perspectives. A story with a title like that, especially involving a specialized "scope," aligns perfectly with his style.

(...)

So what's the takeaway of all this boomer prompting[f]? Two things: the similarities between Me and My Antronoscope and Mountain; and the similarities in Gemini's responses.

First, having read both Me and My Antronoscope and Mountain, I couldn't help but noticing some similarities between them:

  • A civilization that exists in a cave and believes that the cave is all there is.

  • Making a point of the scarcity of space - the space can only be re-shaped, not expanded.

  • As a consequence, there are prohibitions on digging and this is made a major plot element.

  • Explorers - driven by belief that there must be other voids in the stone - set out to find them despite the prohibitions.

  • The technique of preserving space by moving the dug-out rock to the rear and filling in the tunnel, thus creating a bubble moving through the rock (called solidity-ship by Bayley and bubble ship by Cixin).

  • Ultimately we understand that they live inside a planet surrounded by infinite space.

I believe that Cixin has read Me and My Antronoscope - as a SF author he has undoubtedly consumed much SF himself, and given his preference for fiction of the same era and the same kind of way-out ideas that Bayley has, I'm sure the story resonated with him. But is it plagiarism? I don't think so. The story structures differ, and Cixin fixes one obvious problem with Bayley's story: if you were to tunnel several laps around a planet, you would undoubtedly notice that the tunnel curved "downwards" over larger distances, which would tell you that you're not digging in an infinity of rock. Still, I thought I'd ask Gemini if Liu Cixin is a Temu Barrington Bayley:

Me

"Me and my Antronoscope" seems similar to "Mountain" by Liu Cixin. Has this been noticed anywhere?

Gemini

That's a very interesting observation, and it's certainly possible that there are thematic or conceptual similarities between Barrington Bayley's "Me and My Antronoscope" and Liu Cixin's "Mountain."

(...)

I guess that's a no.

Second, when Gemini hallucinated and made up My Matter-Transmitter Telescope it described a telescope that doesn't work by passive reception but manipulates the stone - by sampling it, which is the same concept as it included in The Lithic Gaze. Both "telescopes" are active sensors. It's interesting that the knowledge base seems to have this concept adjacent to the idea of a "matter telescope". ChatGPT could only conceptualize a "stone telescope" as a regular telescope made of stone:

Me

A short story about an alien that lives in a universe filled with stone. Called "my stone telescope".

ChatGPT

My Stone Telescope

In a universe where everything was stone-the stars, the sky, even time itself-a little alien named Naru lived on a jagged mountain that hummed with ancient echoes. Naru was not made of stone. He was soft, green, and curious-an oddity in a place where even thought turned slow and heavy with age.

The only thing that moved in Naru's world was his telescope, carved lovingly from obsidian and set with a smooth, glowing lens made of river-stone. Each night, Naru climbed the mountain and peered through it, hoping to see something... different.

One evening, while adjusting the lens, a flicker appeared in the stone sky. It wasn't a crack or a shimmer of quartz-this was movement. Naru gasped. A shimmer of color, soft and swirling, passed across the horizon. He followed it, tracking it night after night, through petrified galaxies and basalt moons.

Eventually, the movement led him to a strange truth: beyond the stone, past the edge of the world, was a sky made of light and breath. A place not frozen in time, but alive.

Naru realized then that his stone telescope wasn't just for looking outward. It was a promise. That even in a world of unchanging silence, wonder could still stir.

And somewhere, perhaps, someone else might be looking back.

...everything was stone-the stars, the sky, even time itself ... Gemini may be hallucinating like crazy, but it has ChatGPT beat in the field of fiction writing. Actually, now that I think about it, those two things may be related.

ChatGPT

Would you like me to expand it or give it an illustration?

Me

Illustrate it.

ChatGPT

Me

Ok, now an illustration of Naru when he finds a friend and they hug.

ChatGPT